My Beloved Family
I am so glad because I have a big family that care and kind to each other. They are my father, my mother, my older sister, and my two sisters. I love them very much, they are very important and precious for me.
The second, I will tell you about my father, my father, is very wise, small talk, and he always give me money for buying skirt because he likes me if I wear the skirt. He call me every day, never absent he call me to remain me for praying. My father order me to be a teacher or lecturer, I do not know why he asks me to be a teacher. The important one I have to do it for my father. I love him very much.
The third, I will tell you about my mother. My mother the most special person and percious for me. She always give me the advice and remember me to worship. My mother is talkative. She always complain about me and my sisters although she is talkative I love her very much. Sometimes when she is in the mood she is very kind, she takes me to go shopping and cook my favorite food.
The fourth is my older sister. Her name is Vivin she is the same with my mother she is very talkative and angry every day even though there is no wrong, actually I love her but she is stingy if I asking for money she never give me, but if I say borrow money she will lend me. She is very diligent and clean, my boarding house never dirty.
The last, I will tell you about my two sisters. They are Windy and Dedek, Windy is lazy student she often gets angry by her teacher because she did not do her homework and she is untidy person but my father never angry to her. She was very different with Dedek.She is smart student, she always get the first rank and never leave her worship especially for praying.
I love my family very much. I feel complete because I have them, and I think I am the lucky one. Thanks god you had give this family for me.
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BalasHapusi really can't to read it
can you revise it?
can be better?
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BalasHapusthat is good essay della!!
BalasHapusbut please change the background, that would make me blind!!
keep writing!!
once more change your background
BalasHapuswhat do you mine your father is small talk?
BalasHapusbe careful with grammar
interesting family :)
BalasHapusBundo, the space in each paragraph is too far.
BalasHapusplease, give your attention about that.
keep writing Bundo..